Solomons Check up.

[solomon]

Tuesday, May 25, 2010
2:00 pm.

A high pitch noise signals the elevator has stopped at the second floor of the huge academy. Stepping out from the lift, Gabriel is still feeling exhausted from his audition. Raising an arm he sniffs before grabbing a deodorant can from his backpack, the aerialist then thoroughly sprays himself. Sniffing again, this time instead of perspiration, Gabriel only smells the Adidas intensive body spray. limping a bit up the corridor he comes to the large wooden door which he reads to himself... " Dr. Castlegate ".

~Gabriel~
Well, time to see the man in the white coat.

Knocking on the door, Solomon hears the click of the door followed by a vocal response...

~Dr. Castlegate~
Gabriel Solomon I presume. Wayne said you would be stopping by for your first check up to see what sort of medical state you are in, please come in ... be seated.

Looking around the small examination room, there is a single bed in one corner and digital scales beside that. On the door side of the room, there is a desk with a computer and paper work neatly placed. In the corner is also a portable curtain where you can change in privacy. The coolest thing Gabriel can see is a replication of the human skeleton. Taking a seat beside the desk, the doctor sits on the main chair in front of the computer. Opening the medical file, the doctor takes notes on the general appearance of Solomon.

~Dr. Castlegate~
While I quickly browse your file Mr. Solomon, mind if I ask a couple of questions ?

~Gabriel~
Not at all.

~Dr. Castlegate~
It mentions here that you have an allergy, is that correct ?

~Gabriel~
Yes, that is still relevant. Before you ask, I will say, I am allergic to peanuts.[/center][/color]
Writing a note on the medical chart the doctor mentions he will inform the chef and adjust a menu to suit.

~Dr. Castlegate~
Ok. there is not many questions as such, but seems this is a physical sort of check up for wrestling, it will have to be pretty intensive. Any questions before I begin ?

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First off the doctor checks his blood pressure, then asks to lift his shirt to listen to his lungs. Writing brief notes as only doctors can, Edward motions to the scales. attached to the scales is a laser which accurately gives the patients height. Popping a thermometer in Gabriels mouth, the Doctor gets a set of needles out which raise the eye brow of the athlete.

~Dr. Castlegate~
( Laughing ) ... Sorry to alarm you, just a little joke we play. Your temperature is fine. You don't drink or smoke do you ?

~Gabriel~
No, I try to eat and live a healthy life style.

~Dr. Castlegate~
So far it shows you like to take care of yourself. Now... Don't be alarmed, this gadget will just test on a scale of 1-10 how much you perceive pain. As I adjust this dial, tell me when you feel discomfort.[/center][/color]
Setting the electronic pulse device on the forearm, the doctor sets the dial at the lowest, watching the patient. Slowly adjusting the dial he reaches just under half way before he gets a reaction. Instead of stopping, he continues to crank up the dial before an obvious grimace of pain appears on Solomons face. Turning the little machine off, before he asks anything, he takes out a small wooden hammer. Checking the reflex he smiles as he writes notes.

~Dr. Castlegate~
Interesting, according to this scale you have a pain tolerance of about 7. Not bad at all.

~Gabriel~
Simply electrifying...
( both him and the doctor laugh.)

~Dr. Castlegate~
Thank you for your patience thus far Mr. Solomon. You continue t o behave and you can have a good boy lolli pop. Three or four final tests then we are done for today. Please lift your shirt so I can check your abdominal area, thank you.[/center][/color]
With latex gloves on, the doctor exams for any abnormality of the obvious organs, asking if there is any pain as he does so. Getting the future superstar to stand, he checks the spine, and position of which he stands. Using various specialist designed equipment, the doctor checks both the inner and outer ears, next the eyes and the way the pupil tracks objects. Tapping his foot gently on the carpet, before the desk he checks the over all hearing. Satisfied so far, Edward continues his poking and prodding, the final thing he checks is the joints.

~Dr. Castlegate~
Excellent, you are in good health Gabriel, lets see if we can keep it this way... Oh, by the way, one final question.. it mentions you have some sort of defect from birth, yet fails to mention what exactly the defect is.

~Gabriel~
Oh that .. ( laughs. )... I could explain it, but it's so much more fun to... um... display it.

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With that, Solomon places both hands in front of him, interlocks his fingers and twists his arms around. They reach the normal point of were shoulders will not go any further, but in Solomon the keep going, to the point of were he steps through his arms like a skipping rope and brings his hands back in front of him.

~Gabriel~
Cool, huh ! ... Both of them for some reason pop out and twist around. Can not remember what they call it though.

~Dr. Castlegate~
Uh... yes quite... unusual. Well thank you for your time, I shall inform your trainer, or yourself if any questions, or further exams are required.[/center][/color]

End Of Thread.
Comments/ criticism welcome.

[Steven Powell]

I liked it brother, very thorough.
I can't see any problems to bring to your attention, it was very nicely written. Be sure to maintain a working relationship with the good doctor, and take any strains/injuries to him for review.